Yale Intro GD

ct.dunn 1:09 pm on April 21, 2020

rosachang 12:06 am on April 23, 2020

Hi Corey! I really enjoy these posters, particularly the second one 🙂 A couple of suggestions: While I do like the eye-catching use of numerous neon text bubbles I was hoping if you could try to create a different rendition with a calmer/sincere atmosphere/visual elements? I know while “a Rant” is often thought of as a loud ramble of words, I think the exhibition meant to showcase all forms of communicating pent up emotions (sad, nostalgic, angry, happy, disappointed) through artworks which would create a more serious tone. Also, the poster seem to convey the event to be performance-esque, especially since “Rant” is often dynamic and requires an audience, so if you could mention it to be an art showcase somewhere that would be great. Lastly, I would watch out for the capitalization of texts in the second poster! Thanks again for your hard work! It was lovely to see your take on the prompt for the first time.