Tilman 9:13 am on April 20, 2020

Hey guys! This is my…

Hey guys! This is my (most) final design. I’d love to hear any comments/critiques! Buy smart 🙂

avery_bo_bavery 3:10 pm on April 29, 2020

Tilman! I’m so sorry, I completely spaced on commenting! I agree with Prof Choi’s comment in class about the background color – it’s very similar to the globe, so from afar it washes away the illustration, and there might be a color option that’s more menacing/urgent to fit the theme of the poster. Play around with it! I also wonder why the inside of the earth is so empty towards the top of the crack. Would it look strange to have more trash up there, so it’s truly overflowing with garbage? Otherwise, I’m so happy with what you’ve done with the idea. I didn’t really give you a lot of specifics to work with, and you made such smart decisions to create a really polished, effective poster. So impressed!!

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