Lourdes Rohan 1:59 am on March 25, 2020
Tags: project3.1 ( 20 )

miss you all and hope…

miss you all and hope you’re safe 🙂
here’s my revised Word Flyer!

annakane 4:36 am on March 26, 2020

I hope you’re doing well! 🙂 I really like the way you laid out the information and worked with negative space in this revision! It feels very structured and stable without feeling cramped or jumbled.
Tilman 8:40 am on March 26, 2020

Hello again, this looks great! I love the large, bolded title in this poster and the structure of the negative space. I think this would grab attention well and keep it. I would, however, wonder about the intention in the hanging “violence” at the bottom, and I would like to see a version where the editors line is repositioned so that the bolded title can stand on its own. Great work! 🙂
ct.dunn 9:01 am on March 26, 2020

Hi! I really enjoy the left and right alignments that you have in the title text and subtext. I think the size comparison between the two pieces works well, and because you decided to bold solely these two aspects, they stand out in importance compared to the rest of the piece. Again, I think the level of emphasis given to the description of the event is well designed here!

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